IELTsWriting

P18, Example 1.

按类别划分

Britain: 在所有商品类别的消费最多，其中photographic film最高

France, 在3种商品第二高，而另外3种最低

Italy, 在Toys的消费超过该国其它商品各类，并且和France一样高

Germany, 在所有商品类别的消费最低，6种商品消费量差不多

The number of people spent on photographic film in Britain stood at around 170,000, which is the highest figure shown on the chart. By contrast, Germans were the lowest overall spenders, with the same figure (just under 150,000) for each of the six products.

The figures for spending on toys were the same both in Italy and France, at nearly 160,000 sterling. However, while Frence people paid out more than Italians for photographic film and CDs, the latter spent more on perfumes, tennis racquets and personal stereos. The amount spent by Frence people on tennis racquets is the lowest number shown on the chart, at around 145,000 sterling.

1. the highest / lowest figure shown on the chart.
2. stood at around xxx
3. just around/ under/ above/ over/ nearly/ only
4. pay out for xxx ==== spend on xxx
5. the number of xxx(doing) ==== the figure for xxx(doing)

P19, Example 2.

按时间节划分

1999年， USA 20%, CAnada 10%, Mexico 5%

2005年， USA 70%, Canada 70%, Mexico 25%

2009年， USA 80%, Canada 95%, Mexico 45%

In 1999, the proportion of people using the Internet in the USA was approximately 20%. The figures in Canada and Mexico were lower, at about 10% and 5% respectively.

可以使用Saw/Witness，适合用 国家/地区/时间 开头，比如

Both USA and Canada saw a rose in 2005 on Internet usage with around 70% of the population, whereas the figure for Mexico reached just over 25%.

或者直接用类别开头

In 2005, the Internet usage in both the USA and Canada rose to around 70% of the population, while/ by contrast, the figure for Mexico reached just over 25%.

In the year 2009, the percentage of Internet users was the highest in Canada, at over 95%. Nearly all Canadians used the Internet（这是个总结句）, compared to about 80% in the USA and only 45% in Mexico.

还可以用``the highest figure shown on the chart`，比如

the percentage of Internet users in Canada was over 95%, which is the highest figure shown on the chart.

或使用``reach its highest 再配搭 , at over 95%` 比如

Internet usage in Canada reached its highest level in 2009, at over 95%

或The usage of Internet in Canada reached its highest level…

1. the proportion of xxx ==== the percentage of xxx
2. the figure for xxx reached xxx
3. XXX saw a rose in 2005 with arount 60%
4. XXX reached its highest level in 2005, at over 10%.
5. Compare to xxx

Table Chart

Example 1.

开头段

（改写题目）

The table compares(gives the information of) the top five countries(the five hightest ranking countries) in terms of (或仅用for) the figures for visits and the money spent by tourists over a period of two years( between 2013 and 2013).

概括段

（不出现具体数字，仅描述两个趋势/一个最大和一个最小），比如法国游客人数最多（2012和2013），美国钱最多（over the same period) , 写概括段只能从表中看到数据，然后自己捏句子，谁最欢迎，谁挣得钱最多；谁增长飞快等

It is noticeable that France was the world’s most popular tourist country(destination) in the year 2012 and 2013. By contrast(However), the USA earned by far the most revenue from tourism over the same period.

描述段

段一：讲游客数量

先按2012和2013划分，再按从高到低讲游客数量（第一梯队，第二梯队，最后梯队等）

In 2012, there were 83 million tourists visited France, and the USA was the second most visited destination(country), with 66.7 million visitors. Spain and China received just under 58 million tourists, whereas Italy was ranked fifth, at 46.4 million visitors. 2013 saw a increase of between 1 and 4 million tourists on each country, with the exception of China, which received a 2 million fewer visitors than in the previous year.

1. Italy was ranked fifth, at 46.4 million visitors 和 the five hightest ranking countries，利用rank这个词
2. 2013 saw a increase of between 1 and 4 million， 时间作主语，描述趋势
3. in the previous year 前一年

段二：讲游客花费

先按2012和2013划分，后续和段一差不多

People visited the USA spent more in 2013 than 2012 with 139.6 billion and 126.2 billion respectively.

The figures for spending by visitors in the USA increased from 126.2 billion in 2012 to 139.6 billion in 2013, and which were well over(more than) twice as high as those for any other country.

When you add a multiplier like"twice," on “as high as”, it specifies that the first thing is exactly (or more than) double the second thing.

Spain received the second highest amounts of tourists spending(revenue), rising from 56.3 billion to 60.4 billion, followed by France, China and Italy. Interestingly, despite falling numbers of tourists, the number of revenue in China rose by 1.7 billion in 2013.

1. followed by France, China and Italy 表示France, China Italy在Spain后面，这句可以使用respectively句型接具体数字。
2. rose by 表示增加了1.7 billion，通过两个数字减出来的
3. despite falling numbers of tourists， 中国的游客数量少了，但花销更高了
4. the second highest amounts of / the second most visited destination / the widely spoen second language. 表示第二

C12 Test 5-Part 1

*The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.*

*Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant*

Write at least 150 words.


The bar chart compares the proportion of Australian men and women, categorized into six age groups, who participated in periodic physical activity during 2010.

Overall, a clear gender disparity is evident, with female participation rates exceeding those of males across almost all age groups. Furthermore, the two genders display contrasting trends over their lifespan: male activity levels formed a U-shaped curve, whereas female participation peaked in middle age before declining.

Focusing on the males, the highest engagement was recorded among the youngest group (15-24) at 52.8%. Following this peak, there was a significant and steady deterioration in activity levels, which fell to 42.2% for the 25-34 age group and subsequently bottomed out at 39.5% for men aged 35-44. From this trough, a gradual recovery is observed in the older demographics, with the rate climbing to 46.7% for those aged 65 and over.

In stark contrast, Australian women consistently showed higher engagement from the age of 25 onwards. Their participation rate began at 47.7% for the 15-24 bracket and steadily climbed to a zenith of 53.3% in the 45-54 age group. Thereafter, the figure for women experienced a modest decline. Notably, the gap in activity between the genders narrowed with age, with the figures converging towards parity in the eldest group (47.1% for women versus 46.7% for men).

• the figure for women experienced a modest decline. (不一定一直使用see/witness)
• of six age groups/ categorized into six age groups

P53练习2

The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period.


开关

The line graphs show the average amount of money that parents in Birtain spent on their children’s sporting activities per month and the figure for British children who were enrolled in three different sports from 2008 to 2014.

The line graphs show the average monthly expenditure spent by parents in Birtain on their children’s sporting activities and the number of children in Britain participating three different sporting activities between 2008 and 2014.

The line graphs show the mean amount of money that British parents spent on their children’s sporting activities every month and the figure for British children who took part in three different sport activities in a period of six years.

概括

It is clear that British parents spent more money each year on their children’s participation in sports throughout the period shown. In terms of the figure for children taking part, football was by far the most popular activity , significantly more welcomed by children than athletics and swimming.

描述

In 2008, British parents spent an average amount of around 20 pounds every month on their children’s sports. Over the following six years, parents’ spending on children’s sporting activities increased steadly, and by 2014 the average monthly amount had risen to just over 30 pounds.

In 2008, British parents spent an average monthly amount of around 20 pounds on their children’s sporting activities. Parents’ expenditure on children’s sport increased steadly over the following six years, and by 2014 the figure for average monthly amount of spending had risen to just over 30 pounds.

描述

Looking at the participation numbers, in 2008, children enrolled in football account for nearly 8 million, which is nearly four times as high as the figure for those taking part in swimming, and less than 1 million participated athietics. The figure for football participation remained relatively stable over the following six years. By contrast, participation in swimming almost doubled, to nearly 4 million children in the year 2014, and there was a dramatic increase in the number of children doing athietics.

Looking at the participation numbers, in 2008 approximately 8 million British children were enrolled in football, while only 2 million children taking part in swimming course and less than one million participated athletics. The figure for football participation remained relatively stable around 8 to 9 million over the following years. By contrast, participation in swimming almost doubled, to nearly 4 million children in 2014, and there was a nearly fivefold increase in the figure for children doing athletics.

这是的第二个图，先写2008的三个数据点，再写一个趋势（可以是football的reamin stable，也可以是swimming doubled），最后写在2014的三个数据点

比如2008年的三个点

1. 8 million children played football.
   1. 扩展： nearly/approximately 8 million British children were enrolled in football.
2. 2 million children played swimming.
   1. 扩展： only 2 million children signed up for/took part in swimming clubs.
3. 1 million children played athletics.
   1. 扩展： less than one million participated athletics.(前面已经提到两次children了，这次直接省略)

P53练习2

• there was a dramatic/fivefold increase in the number of xxx [在xx方面有几倍的增长]
• over the following xx years [在随后的几年内]
• Participation in xx = xx participation [参与xx活动]
• the figure for xx remained relatively stable [xx的数据保持稳定]
• rising steadily between xx and xx [在xx到xx期间稳定增加]
• be enrolled in/taking part/doing/took part in/played/practised/ 都可以表示参加

P56 练习3

the chart below shows the value of one countries exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016.the table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.


The bar chart and table compare a country’s exporting revenue on five different group of products in the year 2015 and 2016.

It is clear that all products, with the exception of germs and jewllery, experienced growth in their export proportion, and textiles had the most significant growth in earnings. Furthermore, petroleum industry had by far the highest earning products in both years.

Export earnings from petroleum products rose from 61 billion in 2015 to 63 billion in 2016, with an increase of 3%. Revenue from engineered goods had a similar trend, witnessing a marked growth of 8.5% in 2016, stood at around 60 billion.

With regarding to other categories, between 2015 and 2016, there was a significant growth in export revenue from textiles industry of 15.24%, with earnings rising from 35 billion to over 40 billion. By contrast, there was no significant change in the amount of money earned from agricultural industry, which remained stable around 40 billion in both year. Finally, the export earning from gems and jewellery industry dropped by 5.18% during the same period, with revenue falling to around 50 billion.

Regarding the remaining categories, gems and jewellery, agricultural products, and textiles recorded lower earnings in 2015, roughly 53 billion, 40 billion and 35 billion respectively. Textiles showed the most significant proportion increase at 15.24, reaching to nearly 40 billion in 2016. Agricultural industry remained relatively stable, with no significant change in value around 40 billion, while gems and jewellery dropped by 5.18%, falling to approximately 50 billion.

素材

P56 练习3

• with no significant change xx/there was almost no change in xx/

• xx(earnings from xx) dropped by xx, falling to around xx

• Earnings from/revenue from /the amount of money earned from xx

• Rose/had rosen/increase/growth

• Decline/falling to/dropped by/down to

• Nearly/approximately/around/close to/roughly/

Part1 C14Test1

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

*Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.*

Write at least 150 words.


The pie chart illustrates the average proportions of three categories of nutrients added to daily meals consumed by people in America, which can be harmful if consumed in excess.

It is clear that the percentages for saturated fat and sodium contained in dinner account for the highest percentages among all meals, while the figures for all nutrients during breakfast are the lowest.

Dinner contains over three times as much sodium as breakfast, standing at 43%,compared to breakfast’s 14%. A similar pattern was observed in the case of saturated fat. The sodium content in lunch exceeds that in snacks and breakfast combined, at 29%.

With regard to the other nutrients, added sugar in snacks makes up 42%, while the figures for breakfast, lunch, and dinner~~,~~ are only 16%, 19% and 23% respectively. Finally, saturated fat is distributed relatively evenly across the four daily meals, with ~~37% in ~~dinner containing the highest percentage at 37%.

Part1 C15Test1

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.


7分

The bar chart compares the analysis of a survey conducted among residents of five Australian cities in terms of their coffee and tea comsumption hobbies.

It is clear that the vast majority of residents visited cafes for coffee or tea in last four weeks across all cities. By contrast, there was no significant difference in the percentage of those who chose to buy instant coffee over the same period.

Looking first at the metropolitan areas, people living in Melbourne prefer going to cafe for coffee or tea, standing at nearly 64% of the total. In comparison, only 42% of Melburnians prefer buying fresh coffee, while Sydney residents have a slightly higher preference at 44%.

With regard to other cities, it is noticable that Hobart has the second-highest percentage of residents who enjoy going to stores for coffee or tea, at approximately 63%. There is no t a clear difference between the figures for people living in Adelaide who prefer buying instant coffee versus those who prefer going out for a drink, both of which are around 50%. Finally, only less than 35% of residents in Brisbane and Adelaide purchased fresh coffee during last four weeks.

9分

The bar chart illustrates the findings of a survey concerning the coffee and tea consumption habits of residents in five Australian cities: Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart.

Overall, the data indicates a clear preference for instant coffee and café visits, while fresh coffee purchases remain comparatively low across all surveyed cities. （保持上面7分其它不变，只把这个概括段替换，就能加0.5分）

In Melbourne and Hobart, the preference for instant coffee is particularly pronounced, with approximately 60% of respondents indicating they purchased instant coffee within the last four weeks. Conversely, fresh coffee purchases are markedly less popular, with only 42% of Melburnians and just 25% of Adelaide residents opting for this choice. Sydney exhibits a similar trend, as 44% of its inhabitants reported buying fresh coffee, but still lagging behind the popularity of instant coffee. （保持上面7分其它不变，只把这个描述段替换，就能加1分）

Examining café visits, Sydney and Brisbane reveal significant engagement, with 50% and 55% of their respective populations frequenting cafés for coffee or tea in the same timeframe. Hobart follows closely with around 63%, indicating a robust café culture. Interestingly, Adelaide presents a unique scenario where the tendencies to purchase instant coffee and to visit cafés approximate 50%, highlighting a balanced consumer preference in that city. Overall, fresh coffee emerges as the least favored option across all regions surveyed.

Part1 C15Test2

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.


7分

This line chart illustrates the figures for visitors to a Caribbean island over a period of eight years.

It is evident that there was a clear preference for people visiting the Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017, while the figure for people choosing to stay on the island remained relatively stable.

In 2010, approximately one million tourists visited the island, with merely 0.25 million of them opting to stay on cruise ships. Over the following six years, the figure for those visiting on cruise ships increased considerably, reaching nearly 1.5 million in 2016. By contrast, there was no significant difference in the number of travelers staying on the island during the same period, which stayed around 1.2 million to 1.5 million per year.

Between 2016 and 2017, the total number of visitors increased dramatically, more than threefold, reaching 3.5 million. During this time, visitors staying on cruise ships made a greater contribution than tourists staying on the island, with 2 million and 1.5 million respectively.

9分

The line graph presented delineates the influx of tourists to a Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017, disaggregated by the type of accommodation chosen.

Overall, there is a notable upward trajectory in the number of visitors across all categories, with those opting to stay on the island consistently outnumbering cruise ship visitors throughout the period under review.

In 2010, the total number of tourists reached approximately 1 million, comprised of around 0.25 million visitors on cruise ships and around 0.75 million choosing to stay on the island. The trend over the subsequent years reveals a significant increase in tourist numbers, with visitors staying on cruise ships experiencing a robust rise. By 2017, numbers for cruise ship visitors had surged to about 1.25 million, while those staying on the island escalated to approximately 2.75 million, reflecting substantial growth in both categories.

The overall total of visitors to the Caribbean island reached 4 million by 2017, marking a marked increase from previous years. Specifically, the number of tourists on cruise ships and those staying on the island demonstrated a coordinated growth trend. The figure for visitors residing on the island consistently constituted the majority, revealing a sustained preference among tourists for land-based accommodation over the cruise option. This trend underscores the island’s appeal as a desirable destination for extended stays.

素材

• there was a clear/notable preference for xxx between xx and xx
• Opt to do sth/choosing to do sth.
• there was no significant difference in xxx
• there was a notable/clear upward trajectory in xxx
• The trend over the subsequent(following) years reveals a significant increase in xx number.
• a robust rise (强力提升)

素材

开头

• 单一图表
  • The provided line graph illustrates/depicts/shows the changes in [topic] in [place] over a period of [X] years, from [year] to [year].
  • The bar chart compares the [data being compared] across several [categories] in the year [year].
  • The pie chart gives information about the proportion of [what is being shown] in [place/context].
  • The table provides a breakdown of statistics regarding [topic].
• 多个图表
  • The two pie charts illustrate the differences in [topic] between the years [year 1] and [year 2].
  • The line graph shows [what the line graph shows], while the bar chart reveals [what the bar chart shows].

概括/总结句式 (Overall/Conclusion)

用于在开头段之后或结尾段，总结图表最核心、最显著的特征。

• 总体趋势
  • Overall, what stands out from the graph is that there was a clear upward/downward trend in [topic] over the period.
  • In general, it is evident that [A] experienced a significant increase, whereas [B] saw a steady decline.
• 最值/最突出特点
  • It is immediately apparent that [category] was the most popular/significant [item] throughout the entire period.
  • Another noticeable feature is that [A] reached its peak in [year], while [B] hit a low point.

几种固定句式

1. N% of 群体/物体 had

增涨句式

1. There was a marked/significant/dramatic/ increase[替换其它涨词] in (the amount of money earned from/ spent by xxx) [主句]
2. There was a fivefold increase in the number of xxx [主句，在xx方面有几倍的增长]
3. the production increased more than eightfold [主句，xx增涨了8倍]
4. the oil price had (more than) doubled/quadrupled [主句，已经翻2/4倍了]
5. 物体 experienced/showed a significant an increase of 20% (增长了20%)。 [主句], reaching N[数字] in 2020. [分句，这里不加to]
6. The figure for 物体 rose steadily from N in 2020 to N’ in 2021. [主句]
7. rising steadily between xx and xx [在xx到xx期间稳定增加] / before rising steadily [作为分句式，主句通常表示稳定一段期间]
8. Starting at N in [年份], the figure rose steadily to M in [年份]. [主句]
9. the oil price went up once again [主句]

下降句式

1. xx(earnings from xx) dropped by 50 million(50%, half) / dropped from xx to xx [主句]
2. xx fell from 20% in 2019 to 12% in 2020. [主句]
3. xx rose to 20% in 2019 but fell again to 12% in 2020. [主句，先上升再下降]
4. the oil price had halved [主句, 半价]
5. the oil price had dropped by(fell to) half [主句, 半价]
6. Decline/falling to/dropped by/down to [作为分句]
7. the sales of [A] hit a low/bottomed out at just under N in [year]
8. After peaking at [N], the number of [A] started to decline. [主句] (在达到顶峰后开始下降)

稳定句式

1. the figure for xx remained relatively stable [主句，xx的数据保持稳定]

2. spending by American increased dramatically/slightly [主句]

3. daily spending had risen to around $200 in the year 2020 [主句]

4. The daily expenditure fluctuated around $200 / many fluctuations can be seen during… [主句]

5. The daily expenditure saw/witnessed significant fluctuations.

6. there was almost no change in the daily spending in the year 2020 [主句]

7. with no significant change in the daily spending [作为分句]

描述数字

1. Earnings from/revenue from /the amount of money earned from xx [主句]
2. 主体 spent/employed/recycled 69% of xxx [主句]
3. reaching its peak of $100 [作为分句]
4. to nearly $100 (单位) [作为分句]
5. stood at nearly $100 [作为分句]

衔接句式

1. over the following xx years
2. Overall / By contrast /Furthermore /
3. We can also see that
4. Looking (first) at xxx number(participation numbers)/ the older age group
5. In each of the years shown on the chart
6. Throughout the 8-year period shown / throughout the period shown
7. With the regard to other xxx/ Regrading other xxx
8. Over the following five/six years / over the 8-year period (shown),

自我翻倍

1. Increased X-fold / Become X times as much
2. Doubled/quadrupled/常见只用doubled，其它的多数用increased X-fold

倍数关系

1. The number of [A] was three times higher than that of [B] (A是B的三倍)
2. The number of [A] was three times/twice as high as that of [B] (A是B的三倍)
3. [A] spent twice as much money on [X] as on [Y] (A在X上花的钱是Y的2倍)

趋势相似与不同

1. a similar pattern was observed in the case of [B]. [主句] (B也呈现了相似的模式)

2. In contrast, the figure for [B] showed an opposite trend. [主句] (B的数据呈现了相反趋势)

3. [A] and [B] followed a noticeably different trajectory over the period. (A和B的轨迹截然不同)

4. the trends for both commodity were noticeably different from each other/those described above [主句，表示不同]

5. the trends for both commodity were very similar [主句，表示相同]

6. the trend reversed itself

7. The trend [over the subsequent(following) years] reveals/indicates/shows a significant increase(decrease) in tourist numbers

排名

1. [A] accounted for the largest proportion of the total, with N% [主句]
2. [A] was followed by [B] and [C], at N% and M% respectively. [主句]
3. The figure for [A], [B], and [C] were N, M, and P, respectively. [主句]

描述占比

1. [A] made up/accounted for/constituted/comprised nearly 60% of the total.
2. A small fraction (5%) of resondents indicated/showed/illustrated that
3. The vast majority of [A], over 80%, prefered [B]. [主句]

描述未来

1. The number of [A] is projected/forecast/predicted to rise to N by [future year]
2. It is anticipated that this trend will continue in the coming years.
3. Looking ahead, [A] is expected to overtake [B] as the leading category. [A有希望超过B, 成为领先类别]

常见同义词

1. Spending, expenditure, the amount of money that xx spent, paid out
2. revenue, earnings, the amount of money earned, Sales
3. Category, group, type
4. Company, industry, manufacturers, brand, firm, producer,
5. the average amount of money, an average of $200 on
6. Annually, average yearly, per year, monthly, per month, weekly, per week, daily, every day, per day
7. Feedback, response,
8. trend, fluctuation, movement, variation, shift
9. proportion, percentage, share, fraction
10. Illustrate, depict, reveal, indicate, represent
11. the level of , the rate of, the amount of, the quantity of,
12. surge, increase, go up, rise(rose, risen),
13. Decline, down to, dropped to , fell to,

副词

1. Nearly/approximately/around/close to/roughly/only
2. Respectively
3. significantly/slightly/considerably/noticeably

形容词

1. Vast/sifnificant/clear/excellent/

最高级

1. the five most popular
2. the vast majority of xxx 谓语 xxx

比较级

1. two times as high as …

大作文

观点类

P119

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

开头段

It is often said that modern life presents us an overwhelming number of choices.

[由modern life give us more choices扩展]

I completely agree with this, and I believe that the Internet and globalisation are the two main (major) factors involved.

[先一边倒地认同, 再说原因：Internet&Globalisation are the major factors.]

主体段一：网络让人有更多选择

It is undeniable that the Internet has led to a dramatic expansion in the number of choices that are available to us.

[同样，主体段一内先说state: Internet led to expansion in the number of choices.

再扩展，比如添加形容词dramatic/添加从句that are available to us.]

For instance, the number of online media options is now almost endless. There are countless websites offering entertainment, news, videos, on-demand TV and music streaming, many of which are free.

[解释1，同样先说state: online media options is endless，然后举例各种实例entertainment, news, videos, on-demand TV and music streaming, 最后再使用个从句 many of which are free.]

I would argue that this abundance of media leads to confusion on the part of the average user, as we have to make so many decisions about the content that we consume.

[结果1, 同样先说state: media leads to confusion on people. 再说原因 as we have to make decisions on xxx]

主体段二：全球化导致人有更多选择

Alongside the influence of the Internet, globalisation is making the world smaller and compounding this problem of too much choice.

[除了网络Alongside the Internet,

State: 全球化让世界更小，加剧|造成了问题globalisation makes the world smaller and compound the problem

太多选择是一种问题：problem of too much choice]

compound v.复合，加剧，造成

Cheap international flights have made overseas travel possible for millions of people, but this also means that we are faced with a world of options when deciding where to go on holiday or even where to live.

[从留学和旅行两个角度补充]

[旅行：廉价跨国飞行/机票让出国旅行成为可能cheap international flights makes overseas travel possible

but this also means 过渡句子

面对太多选择，无法决定假期去哪儿，或者去哪儿生活where to go on holiday or where to live.]

We no longer have the limited but simple travel choices of our grandparents’ generation.

[旅行角度的解释]

The same is true if we look at the increasing tendency for young people to study abroad.

[留学角度：the increasing tendency of study abroad扩展成的一句话,添加主语for young people]

While the opportunity for overseas study seems appealing, many students are confused about where to go and which path to take

[留学的解释：people are confused about where to go and which path to take]

总结

In conclusion, we are faced with a huge number of options in most areas of life nowadays, and this is often more bewildering than beneficial.

[总结就是改写标题+重申观点：我同意选择太多了]

It is often said that modern life presents us with an overwhilming number of choi

It if often said that modern life presents us with an overwhelming number of choices. I completely agree with this, and I believe that the Internet and globalisation are the two major factors involved.

It is often said that modern life presents us with an overwhelming number of choices, I completely agree with that, and I believe that the Internet and globalisation are the two major factors involved.

On the one hand, It is undeniable that the Interned has led to a dramatic expansion in the number of choices that are available to us. The number of online media options, for instance, is now almost endless. There are countless websites offering entertainment, news, videos, music and live streaming, many of which are free. I would argue that this abundance of media leads to confusion on average users, as we have to make so many decisions about the content that we consume. A prime example of this trend would be the fact that people had only a few choices of TV channels when they were young, whereas they now have access to thousands of films and series through services like Netflix.

On the other hand, alongside the influence of the Internet, globalisation is making the world smaller and compounding this problem of too much choice. Cheat international flights have made overseas travel possible for millions of people, but this also means that we are faced with a world of options when deciding where to go on holiday and even where to live. We no longer have the limited but simple travel choices of our grandparents’s generation. The same is true if we look at the increasing tendency for young people to study abroad. While the opportunity for overseas study seems appealing, many students are confused about where to go and which path to take.

In conclusion, we are faced with a huge number of options in most areas of life nowadays.

It is often said that modern life presents us an overwhelming number of choices. I completely agree with this, and I believe that the Internet and globalisation are the two major factors involved.

On the one hand, it is undeniable that the Interned has led to a dramatic expansion in number of choices that are available to us. The number of online meadia options, for example, is now almost endless. There are countless weebsites offering entertainment, news, videos, music and live streaming, many of which are free. I would agree that this amount of media leads to confusion on the part of people, as we have to make so many decisions on the content that we consume. A prime example of this trend would be the fact that people had only a few choice of TV channels when they were young, whhile they now have access to thousands of films and TV series throught services such as Netflix.

On the other hand, alongside the influence of the Internet, globalisation is making the world smaller and compunding the problem of too much choice. Cheap international flights made overseas travel possible for millions of average people, but this also means that we are faced a with a world of options when we decide where to go on holiday and even where to live. We no longer have the limited but simple travel option of our grandparents’ generation. The same is true if we look at the increasing tendency for young people to study abroad. While the opportunity for overseas study seems appealing, many students are confused about where to go and which path to choice.

On the other hand, alongside the influence of the Internet, career options is making the world more complex and compunding the problem of too much choice. Emergency of AI opened up a new employment field for many workers, but this also means that we are faced with a huge number of specific and new fields when deciding which path to take. We no longer have the limited but simple career options of our grandparents’ generation. The same is true if we look at the increasing tendency for

On the one hand, it is undeniable that the Internet has led to a dramatic expansion in the number of choices that are available for us. The number of online media options, for instance, is now almost countless. There are endless websites offering entertainment, news, videos, music and live streaming, most of which are free. I would argue that this abundance of media leads to confusion on the part of average people, as we have to make so many decisions about the content we consume. A prime example of this trend would be the fact that people had only a few TV channels when they were young, while they have access to thousands of films and TV series throught streaming platforms like Netflix.